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What would you do if you and your study partner, with whom you had been seriously discussing marriage, suddenly found yourselves all alone together on a desert island? Study economics?
Sociology 500, a Romance (Second Draft) -- The first book in the Economics 101 Trilogy.(On hold.)
Karel and Dan, former American football teammates and now graduate students, meet fellow graduate students Kristie and Bobbie, and the four form a steady study group.

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Saturday, February 10, 2018

[]Backup 2] Economics 101, a Novel, ch_09 -- In the Islands

[JMR201802100930: backup of http://free-is-not-free.blogspot.com/2016/08/economics-101-novel-ch09-in-islands.html.]

[JMR201804071908: edits]

He was quite insistant that you would need another room, but we did not believe him.
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He was quite insistent that you would need another room, but we did not believe him.

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Why don't you go check your accomodations?
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Why don't you go check your accommodations?

--

About two weeks into their stay on the second island, they they wrote letters to professors they had been talking with at Harvard and Berkeley, detailing their work to that point and the adjustments they were making to their approaches with both research and service.
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About two weeks into their stay on the second island, they wrote letters to professors they had been talking with at Harvard and Berkeley, detailing their work to that point and the adjustments they were making to their approaches with both research and service.

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"We appreciate your forebearance."
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"We appreciate your forbearance."

--

[JMR201804071908: end edits]

[JMR201804031323: edits for Xhilr.]

There is a large city about an hour to the north, which has a major airport.
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There is a large city about a chit to the north, which has a major airport.

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At the last layover before they reached the main island, the five of them met with the first counselor to the President of the district of the Church which nominally included the islands to which they were going.
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At the last layover before they reached the main island, the five of them met with the first counselor to the president of the district of the Church which included the islands to which they were going. (Nominally included, since there were no actual Church operations in those islands at that point.)

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Visiting teachers are assigned from the Relief Society, and home teachers are from the priesthood quorums. In the less fully organized branches and wards, they sometimes had couples assigned to be both at once. It wasn't official policy at the time of this story, but it is sort of semi-officially allowed now.
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Visiting teachers were assigned from the Relief Society, and home teachers were from the priesthood quorums. In the less fully organized branches and wards, they sometimes had couples assigned to be both at once. It wasn't official policy at the time of this story, but it would later become a recognized practice.

--

I have letters for you from them.
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I have letters for you from them here.

--

Wait a minute, you say?

Okay, I have a small confession. This is not just a slightly alternate history, this is a different planet.

But there are lots of parallels that I have taken the liberty of translating to artifacts of your own world's history.

"Mormon", for instance. Their Church has a similar history to the Mormons of (ahem) our world, and they believe in a Savior/Messiah with a name cognate of "Jesus" ("God is help") and a title cognate of "Christ" ("Annointed").

(And the prophet who abridged their new world scripture was named a word that seems to be a bi-lingual pun on "more good" and "eternal love", pointing to having a hope of literally following their Savior as they progress from grace to grace, thus, "Mormon" is not exactly a bad translation.)

And their Jesus teaches of repentance and redemption, of salvation by faith on His name, and the idea that the Creator of their universe is a friend, not an enemy, to His children. Thus, Christianity is a good fit for the broader religious context, as well.

(And there history is filled with cases of religion being perverted to ill purpose by those who prefer power to faith, just like ours.)

There are other differences, beyond the ones which necessitated this aside about the parallels. But the differences shouldn't be too surprising. Policy should reflect the historical and social context.
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Wait a saichi, you say? (Or a minute. Three saichi.)

This is, indeed, a different planet. These are not Mormons. The epithet, and the name of the ancient prophet and the scripture from which the epithet is derived, is "Ehyephoot".

The official name of their Church may translate well as "The Church of Jesus Christ for the Saints of the Latter Days" or "The Church of Yeshua Messiah for the Believers of the End Times" or something. There may be many parallels which I depend on in telling this story, but it is not the organization with which you are familiar in your world.

Different world, different history, different social context, no matter how much is similar. Policy reflects the needs of the social context, so I must beg you to bear with the things you find odd.

Pretty please?

--

Bobbie and Karel looked in surprise at the first counselor together. He smiled reassuringly.
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Bobbie and Karel looked together in surprise at the first counselor. He smiled reassuringly.

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You both have been missionaries, and you understand that the happiness of these people is God's only concern."
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You both have been missionaries, and you understand that the happiness of these people is a very high priority for God."

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He's a good man. But if they don't get along, he'll help them find other arrangements.
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He's a good man. If they don't get along, he'll help them find other arrangements.

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Bobbie and Sister MacVittie insisted they could walk, so they spread the luggage across the four taxis, and everyone walked the fifteen minutes to the bungalow.
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Bobbie and Sister MacVittie insisted they could walk, so they spread the luggage across the four taxis, and everyone walked the three punji to the bungalow.

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"Oh, I like him. I think he likes me. But it's hard to get his attention when he spends most of his time on the main island."
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"Oh, I like him. I think he likes me. But it's hard to get his attention when he spends most of his time flying around the islands."

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"Quickly!"
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"Quickly! She'll know what to do."

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On the Sabbath, the chief and his consort, and the shaman and his concubine, came to observe their meetings, making the hut a little crowded. They expressed neither approval nor disapproval after the meetings were over, remaining to listen and talk for a bit, then going to take care of other business.
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On the Sabbath, the chief and his consort, with the shaman and his concubine, came to observe their meetings, making the hut a little crowded. They expressed neither approval nor disapproval, remaining after the meetings were over to listen and talk for a bit, then going to take care of other business.

--

Sabbath. Day of Rest.

As I have mentioned, they have a week of seven days. Seven days approximates the period of their nearer moon, which could partially explain why they have a seven day week in spite of their general standardization on powers of two. But not fully.

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In the evening, there were more ceremonies.
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In the evening, there were more ceremonies, which Karel and Bobbie were requested to attend.

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But when Karel traded for a beaded reed curtain to hang between them, the family indulged them in that much.
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But when Karel traded some materials for a beaded reed curtain to hang between them, the family indulged them in that much.

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But  their host family did not take offense.
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And their host family did not take offense.

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And on the last island, they were again not allowed to stay with separate families. Again, they put up a curtain.
Lest you misunderstand, they were able to develop good relationships with the islanders on both the third and fourth islands, but, on the subject of where they stayed, the islanders just smiled and were insistent.
And lest you should find fault with the islanders, according to the traditions they lived by, Karel and Bobbie would have been guilty of no sin had they given in to temptation and crossed the curtain.
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And on the last island, they were again not allowed to stay with separate families. The shaman and the shamaness were their hosts. And again, they were allowed to put up a curtain.

Lest you misunderstand, they were able to develop good relationships with the islanders on both the third and fourth islands, but, on the subject of where they stayed, the islanders just smiled and were insistent.

"Do you understand?" one woman asked Bobbie one day on the fourth island, while they were working with several other women, collecting breadfruit for a communal feast. "It is not just that we can see the connection you and Karel have. Under our traditions, if you were alone, you would be required to entertain men."

"Really? Then I am glad you insisted we stay together."

The shamaness said, "Our island is not as progressive as some. I hope your reports will not speak ill of us for it."

"Should I not mention this?"

"No," the wife of the chief said, "just please don't judge us ill for it."

"Can I discuss this with Karel?"

"Maybe. I suppose it would help to talk more about it rather than less."

The next day, the chief, the shaman, and a small group of other men met with Karel.

One of the men said, "We understand that Bobbie knows that there are two reasons we have for asking you to stay together."

"She mentioned that she had heard something about being required to entertain men if she were not with me."

Another explained, "We have not had a brothel on the island for a generation. Bobbie is independent."

"She is that. You know it is a valued trait in our culture?"

"In ours," the chief said, "many were calling her wanton. Some of the women wanted to send you both away your first day, without waiting for a plane to take you."

"We appreciate your forebearance."

The shaman said, "That you hold hands at night speaks well of you. That's something we can understand."

The chief added, "You see, we try to avoid situations in which male-female relationships would cause problems. Such problems cause wars."

Karel nodded. "Understood."

That evening, after Bobbie and Karel discussed their day's research, Karel told Bobbie what he had learned.

Bobbie grinned and reached for his hand. "Should we radio for Wycliffe to come take us to a temple?"

The shamaness looked up from her chemistry work. "That would be counter to your course."

--

"It has been our pleasure. Don't wait too long to get married."
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"It has been our pleasure," the shaman said.

The shamaness added, "Don't wait too long to let your legal records enable your realities."

--

Bobbie and Karel carried part of their luggage out of the hut that served as the airport building on the last island towards the plane waiting on the beach.
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While Wycliffe loaded fuel from the supplies shack into the plane, Bobbie and Karel brought their luggage to the beach.

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They loaded the last of it, Karel helped Bobbie climb in, and they waved a final goodbye.
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They loaded the last of it, Bobbie let Karel help her climb in, and they waved a final goodbye.

--

[JMR201804031323: end edits for Xhilr.]


Previous: Fifth Semester, Getting Ready for the Islands Table of Contents

Now we thik we know how Karel and Bobbie got to the islands without getting married. But let's go ahead and get a glimpse of how things went in the islands.



Orson Hyde University campus is nestled against the foothills of a very long mountain range. It is a part of small city that sits between a lake and the mountains.

There is a large city about an hour to the north, which has a major airport. It was this airport at which they said goodbye to their families and left in the company of the MacVitties, after completing their preparations at the university.

During the trip, Bobbie did not pay much attention to the men giving her the eye. She noticed some of them, but she didn't pay much attention.

In the passenger cabin after one layover, she said, "Karel?"

"Yeah?"

"Have you noticed the guys looking at me?"

Karel replied, "Have you noticed me noticing some of the women around? Sometimes a guy gets distracted."

"Are you trying to make me jealous?"

"Maybe, but I was really just thinking that beauty draws the eye. You distract me, too, you know."

Brother and Sister MacVittie studiously ignored this conversation. Their son smirked quietly to himself.

"Telling me I'm beautiful again."

"Just telling it like it is."

"Heh. Thanks. Well, anyway, guys used to hit on me a lot."

"You've mentioned that before."

"Now it seems like I can mostly ignore them before they get that far."

"That's a good thing."

"I'm sure part of that is because I'm with you and don't seem unattached."

Karel cleared his throat.

"And I've gotten into the habit of dressing down a bit."

"When you doll yourself up, you're just gilding the lily."

"Give me a break."

Sister MacVittie leaned across her husband's lap and said, "He's just telling you the truth."

Bobbie looked at the back of the seat in front of her. "I know I am cursed with good looks. But that's actually kind of what I'm trying to talk with Karel about."

"I guess I'll keep my nose out of things."

Professor MacVittie thought it was the better part of valor to stay out of things, too.

But Bobbie was no longer just talking to Karel. "Something's changed inside me. I used to be like a deer caught in a car's headlights when guys looked at me. Now it doesn't mean that much to me. And I think that means guys mostly don't feel as motivated to hit on me."

Karel said, "Mostly. But I've warned a few off, so far."

"And you've missed a couple."

"Yeah. but I'm trying."

"It's okay. I was able to warn those guys off, myself. And I don't feel upset about it any more."

Professor MacVittie finally spoke up here. "That's an important thing. I hadn't realized you were struggling so much with that."

"Guys are generally more civilized at Orson Hyde University."

"Not all that civilized. I think I have said some things I have to apologize for."

"No, you've never offended me."

"I'm glad of that."

Sister MacVittie asked her husband, under her breath, "Pray tell, what is it you think you might have to apologize for?"

He replied, as quietly, "Complimenting her on her looks without thinking how she would take it."

"Oh, that's all." She squeezed his hand.



At the last layover before they reached the main island, they met the first counselor to the President of the District of the Church which nominally included the islands to which they were going.

"I have been authorized to form a traveling branch of the Islands, and to call the two of you to preside over the Island Traveling Branch, Karel as the branch president, and Bobbie as the Relief Society president. Do the two of you accept these callings?"

"Sure."

 "Yeah. Uhm, Yes."

"This means you are authorized to hold your meetings and so forth."

"Okay."

"Your branch is a dependent branch, so you will need to coordinate some things with the parent branch, district, and mission presidencies, as described in the handbooks."

He gave them addresses and long distance phone numbers to contact them by.

"Your own home teachers and visiting teachers are assigned out of the parent branch until and unless better arrangements can be made. They happen to be your parent branch second counselor and his wife."



Visiting teachers are assigned from the Relief Society, and home teachers are sent from the priesthood quorums. In the less fully organized branches and wards, sometimes they have couples assigned to do both at once. It wasn't official policy at the time of this story, but it is sort of semi-official now.



"I don't expect that they will actually be able to come visit you here in the islands, but you can keep contact by mail. And they have told me that, if there is an emergency, you can call them collect."

"If we can get to a phone." Karel commented.

"Radio can be patched in. And you will be in their prayers."

"That will be helpful." Bobbie nodded, swallowing suddenly.

"Since this is the district, the mission president has authorized me to authorize the two of you to perform baptismal interviews. The district president has authorized you to perform all non-temple ordinances, as inspired by the Holy Spirit, Karel presiding and Bobbie assisting, as necessary, as explained in the manuals."



Wait a minute, you say?

Okay, I have a small confession. This is not just a slightly alternate history, this is a different planet. Lots of parallels that I have taken the liberty of translating to artifacts of your own world's history.

"Mormon", for instance. Their Church is one with a similar history to the Mormons of (ahem) our world, and they believe in a Savior/Messiah with a name cognate of "Jesus" ("God is help") and a title cognate of "Christ" ("Annointed One").

(And the prophet who abridged their new world scripture is named a word that is a pun on "more good" and "eternal love", pointing to having a hope of literally following their savior as they progress from grace to grace.)

And their Jesus teaches of repentance and redemption, of salvation by faith on His name, and the idea that the Creator of their universe is a friend, not an enemy to His children.

And there are a few differences, such as the ones I just mentioned. But maybe it shouldn't be too surprising. Policy should reflect the historical and social context.



"Now, in addition to my calling as first counselor in the district, I am first counselor in the temple presidency for the temple for this district."

"Oh." Bobbie blinked.

"Be happy to have you visit if you decide you have reason to get up that way."

"Understood." Karel nodded.

"I know you've heard it before, but it will be to your own benefit, as well as the benefit of the Church, that you set the best example you can for the people of these islands. You both have been missionaries, and you understand that the happiness of these people is God's only concern."

Bobbie and Karel both agreed.

After more discussion, he sent them on their way, with the blessings of God.

And they flew on to the main island near where they would be doing their research.



"Yo. You must be the professor and family and students."

"Sheldon MacVittie. Would you be Zedidiah?"

"He's Zedidiah."

"Hi." Zedidiah raised his hand in greeting.

"I'm Wycliffe."

"Good to meet you."

"Yeah. Likewise. Luggage there?" Wycliffe indicated the trunks and other luggage stacked neatly at the edge of the tarmac, where the MacVittie's son was keeping an eye on it.

"That's our stuff," Bobbie confirmed. "Do we have too much?"

"It should fit in one go, right, Zed?"

"Yeah. A little tight, but it'll be okay for a short hop."

Karel started chuckling as Wycliffe examined him and Bobbie.

"Wycliffe, do you mind?" Bobbie was also chuckling.

"Just wondering if I dare make a pass at the prettiest lady I expect to ever see in these islands."

"You just did." Bobbie laughed.

The MacVitties kept a watchful eye, amused, but ready to take action. Karel didn't seem worried.

"Wye, not the paying customers." Zedidiah looked up from the mental calculations he was making about how the luggage might fit in their plane.

"She yours?" Wycliffe asked Karel.

Karel shook his head. "She is her own, but I wouldn't try taking liberties with her."

Wycliffe grinned. "I'm not sure whether I'd be more worried about your response or hers if I did."

Karel and Bobbie both laughed.

"Wye! Knock it off!" Zedidiah stopped his examination of the luggage and came back. "I must apologize for my partner."

"No offense taken," Bobbie was still laughing. "An open pass is a bit refreshing, even if I'm not planning on picking it up. I'll be a bit too busy. Sorry."

"Understood. 'Though I'm not quite sure how you two fit together."

Bobbie and Karel looked at each other, amused, and Wycliffe watched them.

"Leave it alone, Wye, and help me figure the luggage out."

"Yeah. Lemme help you work that out."

And both of them went over to the luggage and started measuring pieces with their hands, talking about where to load them in the plane's cargo area.

"Do you think we can trust them?" Professor MacVittie asked.

"I think so." Bobbie replied.

"He's not entirely harmless," Karel pursed his lips to one side. "But I get the feeling he isn't one to take advantage of people. Just says what he thinks."

"I think I agree," Sister MacVittie said.

Wycliffe went into the building, and Zedidiah returned. "We're pretty share we can take it all in one trip. If not, we have a friend or two who would be willing to fly the rest out with the mail or something. But you'll need a couple of taxis to where you're staying tonight. Wycliffe has gone after them, and for someone to take care of your paperwork."

"You took care of a place for us here?"

"No, the islanders did. We told them about you and they decided where you'll stay. That's the way they work. You can walk there, but the luggage can't, and that's why you'll need the taxis. Ah. Here comes Officer Paalo."

An islander approached them from withing the building. "Hello! Welcome to the islands."

"Officer Paalo can stamp your visas."

After introductions all around, Officer Paalo counted their pieces of luggage without bothering to look inside, scanned quickly over their immunization paperwork, took notes in an official-looking logbook, and gave them visa stamps in their passports.

"Oh. You're not married?" he asked, handing Karel and Bobbie back their passports.

"No, ..." Karel replied.

"Not engaged?"

'No." Bobbie replied with a shake of her head.

"Then I should ask. We were under the impression you two would be staying together. Wycliffe informs us that we may be mistaken."

Karel looked at Bobbie, and she just closed her eyes.

"Uhn, that would not be appropriate," Karel said, reaching out to reassure Bobbie with a pat on her arm.

Bobbie opened her eyes. "Definitely not."

By that time, Wycliffe had returned with not two, but four taxis.

"Change of plans. The bungalow they 

"When they found out your students would not be sleeping together, they decided to change your ac

Professor MacVittie introduced himself and gave them contact information for the university and requested to be contacted immediately if anything untoward happened while carrying Karel and Bobbie from island to island.

Then Wycliffe and Zedidiah introduced them to Officer Paalo, who stamped their visas as a representative of the government and gave their luggage a cursory check, and took care of other such necessary paperwork.

And Karel and Bobbie went over their schedules with Wycliffe and Zedidiah.

The MacVitties spent a couple of days vacationing while Karel and Bobbie made contacts, learned a little more about the islands, and reviewed their preparations.

Then Zedidiah flew the five of them to their first island, which was close by. Zedidiah and Wycliffe generally flew without co-pilot, saving the weight for cargo.

On the first island, Zedidiah introduced them to Nazoru and his daughter Hanaka, who were fairly comfortable with foreigners and with English, and could serve as intermediaries if necessary.

Nazoru and Hanaka offered to let them both stay in their hut. They were surprised and somewhat amused that they wanted to stay separately.

Ultimately, it was decided that Bobbie would stay with Hanaka and Nazoru, and they found another family for Karel to stay with.

And they found a family for the MacVitties to stay with, as well.

Nazoru and Hanaka introduced them to many of the people on the island, and Karel and Bobbie got to work and met more. At first, they just let the islanders teach them how they lived. Then they started helping out when they could see ways they could help.

They compiled their notes in the evenings, being careful to change names and otherwise keep the private information private. They found it worked best to go over their data with the families they stayed with, for accuracy, and also to assure that the private information was kept anonymous and private.

Again, the MacVitties stayed out of the way, leaving the work to the students. Their job was simply to be there if they needed help. On the other hand, they were also interested in the island life, and spent most of their time learning how the islanders lived. Professor MacVittie took some notes of his own, but refrained from recording details that might be private.

Towards the end of the week, they got together to compare notes. Other than that, they spent as much time working separately as together.

Sometime during the first week, one of the islanders came to Karel looking for medical help. One of the children had cut her leg. They were surprised when he deferred to Bobbie, insisting that he be there even though Bobbie did the actual cleaning and bandaging up.

They asked about the usual procedure, and the islanders explained that the village elders had already prayed over the wound. But they knew that foreigners did some other useful things, so they had asked.

The next time, Bobbie and Karel had the parents come, and let the parents perform their traditional first aid. Bobbie showed them a few more small things they could still do when she and Karel were gone.


Nazoru and Hanaka joined their first Sunday services, watching with interest. Afterwards, they asked Bobbie and Karel about their beliefs. They continued to join the services for the whole month, and continued to ask questions.

Other islanders also visited during the later Sunday services.

After two weeks, Zedidiah came to pick the MacVitties up. They were sad to go. (And the family they had been staying with was sad to see them go so soon.) Professor MacVittie took Bobbie and Karel's initial reports back to the university with him, with some letters home, and to Dan and Kristie and other friends.

During the month on the first island, Bobbie and Karel participated in the birthing of two babies. Again, they let the islanders teach them what they usually did, trying to avoid teaching them things they would not be able to continue after they left.

And then Zedidiah picked them up and flew them to their next island, introducing them to islanders who would help them get started before he left.

And Zedidiah took their reports and other mail with him to send on.



And that was pretty much the way it went on each island.

Except that on the third and fourth islands Wycliffe picked them up. The distances were longer, and Wycliffe had more experience with long distances.

While they were on the second island, they wrote letters to professors they were talking with at Harvard and Berkeley, detailing their work to that point and adjustments they were making to their approaches.

A plane came in after about two weeks, and they sent those letters with the pilot.

On the third island, they got enthusiastic responses from their respective schools, both hinting at the possibility of assistant professorship positions.

On the last island, having become accustomed to their work, they had a little time, maybe once a week, to spend together walking on the beach and talking. Not wanting to tempt each other, they focused on their work and refrained from even holding hands.
 


"Got everything?"

"Double and triple checked."

Bobbie and Karel were pushing their luggage out of the hut that served as the airport building on the last island, to the plane waiting on the airstrip.

"I'm gonna miss these islands."

"Me too. In some ways it seems like I've been back on my mission."

"Sans companion?"

"No, not really."

Karel and Bobbie looked at each other. Wycliffe must have missed the meaning that passed without words between them in that look.

"I've been silly."

"No you haven't."

"I wish I could just ask Wycliffe to let us fly back by ourselves. I really want to talk with you all by ourselves."

"Would you be okay navigating over ocean?"

"True. The weather's different, and you have to depend more on instruments."

"And, of course, it's their plane, not ours."

"Do you think those two joke about us?"

"Listening to their chatter on the radio, yeah. Does it matter?"

"Guess not."

"Let's get our luggage on the plane."

"Hi, Wycliffe! Good to see you again."




And now we know enough to continue with the story.


Table of Contents Next: Bobbie and Karel -- Changing Priorities



The previous backup for this chapter is here: http://joel-rees-economics.blogspot.com/2016/08/bk-economics-101-novel-ch09-in-islands.html.

(There is no second draft of this chapter yet.)

Monday, April 24, 2017

RFQ4: Table of Contents & Title Page

Economics 101, a Novel

Written by Joel Matthew Rees, Amagasaki, Japan.
Copyright 2016, 2017 Joel Matthew Rees
All rights reserved.



[Yet another false start.]

Table of Contents

  1. Abandoned Preface -- Forewarned, Foreword
    -- in which I dump a lot of information.
  2. The Framing Story -- the Pilots and the Island
    -- in which two graduate students who have been doing research together find themselves suddenly alone on a desert island.
  3. Priorities Begin to Change
    -- in which Karel and Bobbie discover that they will have more time to explore their desert island.
  4. Wycliffe's Punishment
    -- in which we get to know Wycliffe a little better just before we lose him.
  5. Tentative Exploration (incomplete edit)
    -- in which Bobbie and Karel start taking a look around their new home.
  6. A Little Cosmology (incomplete edit)
    -- in which I try to invent a world.
  7. Chapter
    in which .
  8. Wycliffe Changing His Heart
    -- in which we take a look at the afterlife and Wycliffe tries various ways to make amends.
  9. Chapter
    in which .
  10. (placeholder)
    (placeholder)



This novel is an extract and adaptation of two drafts, which are found in my Freedom Is Not Free and Fantasy Economics blogs.


[Constructing as I assemble the chapters.]



[1st draft table of contents.]
[2nd draft start: Economics 101 table of contents]
[2nd draft start: Sociology 500 table of contents]

[Earlier trashed version RFQ3.]

RFQ3: Table of Contents -- Title Page

(Yet another false start:)

Economics 101, a Novel

Written by Joel Matthew Rees, Amagasaki, Japan.
Copyright 2016, 2017 Joel Matthew Rees
All rights reserved.




Table of Contents

  1. Author's Forward
    in which I try to excuse myself for imposing this overlong rant on the world.
  2. The Framing Story -- the Pilots and the Island
    -- in which two graduate students who have been doing research together find themselves suddenly alone on a desert island.
  3. Priorities Begin to Change
    -- in which Karel and Bobbie discover that they will have more time to explore their desert island.
  4. Wycliffe's Sacrifice
    in which we get to know Wycliffe better just before we lose him.
  5. A Little Cosmology
    -- in which I pretend to have something profound to say about the meaning of God and prayer in Bobbie and Karel's world.
  6. Chapter
    in which .
  7. Chapter
    in which .
  8. Chapter
    in which .
  9. Chapter
    in which .
  10. Chapter
    in which .
  11. (placeholder)
    (placeholder)



This novel is an extract and adaptation of two drafts, which are found in my Freedom Is Not Free and Fantasy Economics blogs.

[1st draft table of contents]
[2nd draft Economics 101 table of contents]
[2nd draft Sociology 500 table of contents]
[4th draft Economics 101]

Tuesday, August 16, 2016

[Backup] Economics 101, a Novel, ch_09 -- In the Islands

[JMR20180106: backup of http://free-is-not-free.blogspot.com/2016/08/economics-101-novel-ch09-in-islands.html. Unused text for this chapter can be found here: http://joel-rees-economics.blogspot.com/2016/08/bk-pasteboard-departure.html.]

(The framing story starts is here: http://free-is-not-free.blogspot.jp/2016/03/economics-101-novel-ch00.html. If you haven't read that, you might want to. Otherwise, the rest of this may not make much sense.

Introductions and characterizations begin here: http://free-is-not-free.blogspot.com/2016/05/economics-101-novel-ch01-introducing.html.

In the the last chapter, Karel and Bobbie get ready to go to do their fieldwork in the Islands: http://free-is-not-free.blogspot.com/2016/08/economics-101-novel-ch08-getting-ready.html.

If you don't care about characterization, you might want to jump ahead: http://free-is-not-free.blogspot.jp/2016/03/economics-101-novel-ch10-bobbie-and.html.

Of course, we're almost done telling you how they ended up still not openly committed to each other when they were finished with their research projects, so why don't you just go ahead and read this chapter?)



Orson Hyde University campus is nestled against the foothills of a very long mountain range. It is a part of small city that sits between a lake and the mountains.

There is a large city about an hour to the north, which has a major airport. It was this airport at which they said goodbye to their families and left in the company of the MacVitties, after completing their preparations at the university.

During the flight, Bobbie did not pay much attention to the men giving her the eye. She noticed some of them, but she didn't pay much attention.

While waiting at a layover, she said, "Karel?"

"Yeah?"

"Have you noticed the guys looking at me?"

Karel replied, "Have you noticed me noticing some of the women? Sometimes a guy gets distracted."

"Are you trying to make me jealous?"

"Maybe, but I was really just thinking that beauty draws the eye."

"Telling me I'm beautiful again."

"Just telling it like it is."

"Heh. Well, anyway, guys used to hit on me."

"You've mentioned that before."

"Now it seems like I can ignore them before they get that far."

"Good."

"I'm sure part of that is because I'm with you. And I've gotten into the habit of dressing down."

"When you doll yourself up, you're just gilding the lily."

"Give me a break."

Sister MacVittie leaned across her husband's lap and said, "He's just telling you the truth."

Bobbie looked at the back of the seat in front of her. "I know I am cursed with good looks. Hmm. But that's actually kind of what I'm trying to talk with Karel about."

"I'll keep my nose out of things."

Professor MacVittie thought it was the better part of valor to stay out of things, too.

"Something's changed inside me. I used to be like a deer caught in headlights when guys looked at me. Now it doesn't mean much to me. And that means guys mostly don't hit on me."

Karel said, "Mostly. But I've warned a few off, so far."

"And you've missed a couple."

"Yeah. but I'm trying."

"It's okay. I was able to warn those guys off, myself. And I don't feel upset about it any more."

Professor MacVittie finally spoke up here. "That's an important thing. I hadn't realized you were struggling so much with that."

"Guys are generally more civilized at the Orson Hyde University."

"Not all that civilized. I think I have said some things I have to apologize for."

"No, you've never offended me."

"I'm glad of that."




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At the last layover before they reached the main island, they met the second first counselor to the President of the District of the Church which nominally included the islands to which they were going. He confirmed the information they had received at the university concerning their church activities.

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He also gave them contact information for a family from the closest branch who were assigned as their home/visiting teachers.



Visiting teachers are sent from the Relief Society, and home teachers are sent from the priesthood quorums. In the less fully organized branches and wards, sometimes they have couples assigned to do both at once. It wasn't official policy at the time of this story, but it is sort of official now.



He hoped they wouldn't mind if no one was able to actually come to the islands to visit them. They had promised to try, but it would be rather a sacrifice to do so.

Karel and Bobbie said they understood, and appreciated having people nearby who would be praying for them, whom they could at least contact in times of emergency.

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He mentioned in passing that he was also the second first counselor in the temple presidency. He told them they would be happy to have them come to the temple any time they could get out that way. He refrained from mentioning anything specific.

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Then he repeated the encouragement that they had been given before to be good examples as members of the Church. And he sent them on their way.

And they flew on to the main island near where they would be doing their research.



Their charter pilots, Wycliffe and Zedidiah, met them on arrival at the main island.

Professor MacVittie introduced himself and gave them contact information for the university and requested to be contacted immediately if anything untoward happened while carrying Karel and Bobbie from island to island.

Then Wycliffe and Zedidiah introduced them to Officer Paalo, who stamped their visas as a representative of the government and gave their luggage a cursory check, and took care of other such necessary paperwork.

And Karel and Bobbie went over their schedules with Wycliffe and Zedidiah.

The MacVitties spent a couple of days vacationing while Karel and Bobbie made contacts, learned a little more about the islands, and reviewed their preparations.

Then Zedidiah flew the five of them to their first island, which was close by. Zedidiah and Wycliffe generally flew without co-pilot, saving the weight for cargo.

On the first island, Zedidiah introduced them to Nazoru and his daughter Hanaka, who were fairly comfortable with foreigners and with English, and could serve as intermediaries if necessary.

Nazoru and Hanaka offered to let them both stay in their hut. They were surprised and somewhat amused that they wanted to stay separately.

Ultimately, it was decided that Bobbie would stay with Hanaka and Nazoru, and they found another family for Karel to stay with.

And they found a family for the MacVitties to stay with, as well.

Nazoru and Hanaka introduced them to many of the people on the island, and Karel and Bobbie got to work and met more. At first, they just let the islanders teach them how they lived. Then they started helping out when they could see ways they could help.

They compiled their notes in the evenings, being careful to change names and otherwise keep the private information private. They found it worked best to go over their data with the families they stayed with, for accuracy, and also to assure that the private information was kept anonymous and private.

Again, the MacVitties stayed out of the way, leaving the work to the students. Their job was simply to be there if they needed help. On the other hand, they were also interested in the island life, and spent most of their time learning how the islanders lived. Professor MacVittie took some notes of his own, but refrained from recording details that might be private.

Towards the end of the week, they got together to compare notes. Other than that, they spent as much time working separately as together.

Sometime during the first week, one of the islanders came to Karel looking for medical help. One of the children had cut her leg. They were surprised when he deferred to Bobbie, insisting that he be there even though Bobbie did the actual cleaning and bandaging up.

They asked about the usual procedure, and the islanders explained that the village elders had already prayed over the wound. But they knew that foreigners did some other useful things, so they had asked.

The next time, Bobbie and Karel had the parents come, and let the parents perform their traditional first aid. Bobbie showed them a few more small things they could still do when she and Karel were gone.

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Nazoru and Hanaka joined their first Sunday services, watching with interest. Afterwards, they asked Bobbie and Karel about their beliefs. They continued to join the services for the whole month, and continued to ask questions.

Other islanders also visited during the later Sunday services.

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After two weeks, Zedidiah came to pick the MacVitties up. They were sad to go. (And the family they had been staying with was sad to see them go so soon.) Professor MacVittie took Bobbie and Karel's initial reports back to the university with him, with some letters home, and to Dan and Kristie and other friends.

During the month on the first island, Bobbie and Karel participated in the birthing of two babies. Again, they let the islanders teach them what they usually did, trying to avoid teaching them things they would not be able to continue after they left.

And then Zedidiah picked them up and flew them to their next island, introducing them to islanders who would help them get started before he left.

And Zedidiah took their reports and other mail with him to send on.



And that was pretty much the way it went on each island.

Except that on the third and fourth islands Wycliffe picked them up. The distances were longer, and Wycliffe had more experience with long distances.

While they were on the second island, they wrote letters to professors they were talking with at Harvard and Berkeley, detailing their work to that point and adjustments they were making to their approaches.

A plane came in after about two weeks, and they sent those letters with the pilot.

On the third island, they got enthusiastic responses from their respective schools, both hinting at the possibility of assistant professorship positions.

On the last island, having become accustomed to their work, they had a little time, maybe once a week, to spend together walking on the beach and talking. Not wanting to tempt each other, they focused on their work and refrained from even holding hands.

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"Got everything?"

"Double and triple checked."

Bobbie and Karel were pushing their luggage out of the hut that served as the airport building on the last island, to the plane waiting on the airstrip.

"I'm gonna miss these islands."

"Me too. In some ways it seems like I've been back on my mission."

"Sans companion?"

"No, not really."

Karel and Bobbie looked at each other. Wycliffe must have missed the meaning that passed without words between them in that look.

"I've been silly."

"No you haven't."

"I wish I could just ask Wycliffe to let us fly back by ourselves. I really want to talk with you all by ourselves."

"Would you be okay navigating over ocean?"

"True. The weather's different, and you have to depend more on instruments."

"And, of course, it's their plane, not ours."

"Do you think those two joke about us?"

"Listening to their chatter on the radio, yeah. Does it matter?"

"Guess not."

"Let's get our luggage on the plane."

"Hi, Wycliffe! Good to see you again."

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And now we know enough to continue with the story. Once again, here is the link to chapter 10, where our two co-protagonists begin adjusting to the uninhabited island where Wycliffe took them: http://free-is-not-free.blogspot.jp/2016/03/economics-101-novel-ch10-bobbie-and.html.

(The chapter index is here: http://joel-rees-economics.blogspot.jp/2016/04/economics-101-novel-index.html)

[Backup] Economics 101 pasteboard departure

[Pasteboard buffer for http://free-is-not-free.blogspot.com/2016/08/economics-101-novel-ch09-in-islands.html. Original would be at http://free-is-not-free.blogspot.com/2016/08/pasteboard-departure.html, if published.]


Our co-protagonists and their parents met with Professor MacVittie and other university personnel to make sure all the necessary preparations were complete. Then they said goodbye to their parents, and left campus for the airport with Professor and Sister MacVittie and their youngest son.

Their flight took off without incident, and they made a connecting flight or two to the coast. (I am not saying which coast.)

From the coast, they had several more connecting flights. Not much happened, but Bobbie noticed two things on route.

At the coast, she said, "Karel, have you noticed the guys hitting on me?"

"I've noticed a few doing double-takes."

"Double-takes don't really bother me."

"I have noticed a few guys deliberately ignoring me and the professor and trying to get your attention."

"That's what I'm talking about."

"How should I react?"

"I don't particular want attention from the kind of guy that would do that."

"I can run interference?"

"I'd appreciate it, if things get out of hand."

"Should we ask the professor and Sister MacVittie to help?"

"That would be too unnatural."

"Pardon me for listening in, Bobbie, but Brother MacVittie and I will be happy to help."

"I'll say something if anything goes that far."

What she didn't say was that she was noticing that she seemed to be able to turn most of the probing looks away with hardly any overt reaction at all. It felt good.

At one layover, they were seated at an airport concessions cafeteria. Karel and Bobbie were sitting together, and the MacVitties were at a neighboring table.

Karel had gone to the counter to pick up their food.

A rugged looking fellow sat down across from Bobbie.

"Hello beautiful."

"Do you make a habit of talking to yourself?"

The man reached out and caught Bobbie by the wrist. She moved her arm in a way that only a dancer would know and the man's hand closed on air.

The MacVitties were watching without watching. Their son stood up and went to the counter where Karel was picking up the food.

Karel was also watching out of the corner of his eye.

"Nice moves."

"The seat you are sitting in wasn't really open."

The MacVittie's son said, "I'll get the food."

"Thanks. I think I'd better go rescue that guy." Karel said, loud enough for the man to hear.

"Some girls know what they want. I think you are a little confused."

"I think not."

"That runt you were with isn't worth the trouble he's caused you."

"Far more than the trouble he's caused me, not that it's any of your business."

This time the man reached with both hands and was too quick. Bobbie was cool as ice.

Karel, standing behind the man, said, "So, Should I do the honors, or should I leave him to you?"

Bobbie smoothly extracted her wrists and slapped the man. and said, "I

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Sheldon MacVittie
Dean Hayworth
Professor White
Bobbie has two younger brothers, Rick (and Lupe) and Gary.
Karel has sisters, Charlotte, Sheryl
Bobbie's part time job
Dan's little sister, Sheliah, older sister Deborah, brother Timothy

5, 6, 7, 8, 9



ch. 9

sixth semester/fieldwork

Starting the fieldwork with the MacVitties

Before leaving for islands:

acknowledging mutual interest
reasons for postponing

at main island (is main island first?)

Wye and Zed and their charter service

the four islands

Hanaka and father on first island

 In the days before returning,
(pushing luggage on cart!)
some sort of strong commitment,
hesitation to be demonstrative around islanders --
don't want to be misunderstood


Saturday, August 13, 2016

[Backup] Economics 101, a Novel, ch_08 -- Getting Ready for the Islands in the Fifth Semester

[JMR20180106: backup of http://free-is-not-free.blogspot.com/2016/08/economics-101-novel-ch08-getting-ready.html.]

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"Yeah, that."

"And I'm scared of losing this image I have of you as the perfect man."

"Platonic perfection or Plutonic?"

Bobbie slapped his stomach. Somewhat gently.
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"Yeah, that." She patted him on the stomach. "And I'm scared of losing this image I have of you as the perfect man."

"Platonic perfection or Plutonic?"

She slapped his stomach. Somewhat gently.

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Bobbie helped deliver Melissa's baby.
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Bobbie helped deliver Melissa and Winn's baby.

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The split the materials and searched through it.
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They split the materials and searched through them.

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"Do we really want to be on the folk dance team this semester?"
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"Do we really want to be on the folk dance team next semester?"

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"I need about two weeks. How about you?"

"I think I can do my stuff in one, but two would be a bit easier."

"We don't want to push our schedules on the people we're going to study, I think."

"Good point."
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"I need at least two weeks. How about you?"

"I think I can do my stuff in two, but longer might be a bit easier."

"We don't want to push our schedules on the people we're going to study, I think."

"Good point. Maybe some service project kinds of stuff, too?"

"I think so."

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"No. I gave up trying to read her reactions."
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"No. I gave up trying to understand her reactions."

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Bobbie sat down beside him and tickled him. And then they just sat for a few minutes, until Bobbie said,

"You know what the real reason I'm holding back is?"
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Bobbie sat down beside him and tickled him. And then they just sat for several saichis, until Bobbie said,

"You know what the real reason holding me back is?"

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"Uhm. Oh, wow. The Church has no branches or wards on those islands. We need to ask our bishops." (Ergo, no congregations in the islands.)
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"Uhm. Oh, wow. The Church has no congregations in those islands. We need to ask our bishops."

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He even suggested that there would be no policy problems, and maybe not even scheduling problems if we just showed, and asked to use them before we left.
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He even suggested that there would be no policy problems, and maybe not even scheduling problems if we just showed up and asked to use them before we left.

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Karel complied, and Bobbie did not draw back for maybe half a minute. Then she started shaking, and they both drew back. She shook her head.
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Karel complied, and Bobbie did not draw back for maybe two saichis. Then she started shaking, and they both drew back. She shook her head.

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"I asked them about their church. They explained the 'morning' thing. It's code for A. M."

"Huh?"

"Anti-Mormon."
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"I asked them about their church. They explained the 'morning' thing. It's code. Xato Ehlrid. X. E." (Ante-meridian.)

"Huh?"

"Xan-Ehyephoot." (Anti-Ehyephoot.)

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And the Anti-Mormon stuff is basically a ruse.
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And the Anti-Ehyephoot stuff is basically a ruse.

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(The framing story starts is here: http://free-is-not-free.blogspot.jp/2016/03/economics-101-novel-ch00.html. If you haven't read that, you might want to. Otherwise, the rest of this may not make much sense.

Introductions and characterizations begin here: http://free-is-not-free.blogspot.com/2016/05/economics-101-novel-ch01-introducing.html.

In the three parts of the last chapter, we watch them work through their second year:

If you don't care about characterization, you might want to jump ahead: http://free-is-not-free.blogspot.jp/2016/03/economics-101-novel-ch10-bobbie-and.html.)

But there isn't really much left to tell, I suppose.

With Dan and Kristie gone, and as the walls between Bobbie and Karel came crumbling down in slow motion, the energy dynamic changed.

The only real question is why the walls didn't come tumbling down fast enough, and I can't answer that.

Let's see what I can tell you.



Karel and Bobbie got together in the cafeteria to compare their schedules. They hadn't even tried to coordinate their classes, but they would be together in at least one class every day, which was most of their classes.

By the numbers, graduate class loads often look light. The classes themselves are that much harder.

"Do we really want to be on the folk dance team this semester?"

"No time?"

"Well, I really want you to take modern dance with me some time."

"Do we want to tell the team they need to look for people to replace us now rather than in winter semester?"

"Guess not. And we'd miss dancing with our friends, too."

"Do you mind me helping you TA the quantitative analysis class?"

"Of course not. Do you mind me helping you with the medicine and physiology overview?"

Karel reached out and took Bobbie's hand.

She squeezed it and said, "Of course not. How are we going to do the study groups this semester?"

"We'll just see how it goes."

"Can we really handle the marriage and religion class together?"

"Why not?"

"I mean the rumors, not the pressure."

"With all the rumors we've successfully ignored so far, I don't think we'll have a problem."

"But things have changed between us."

Karel looked up and searched Bobbie's eyes for an answer to an unvoiced question. "Doesn't matter. If we can ignore rumors one way, we'll have to ignore rumors another. Have they really changed?"

Bobbie was searching Karel's eyes. "You could kiss me."

Karel leaned across the table and kissed Bobbie gently, full on the lips. It was not a long kiss, but when they separated, Bobbie's eyes were closed.

"I could imagine doing that every morning." Then she opened her eyes. "But not at Berkeley and not at Harvard."

"So?"

"You're talking with Berkeley."

"True."

"I'm talking with Harvard."

"Talk is talk. I could deal with doing some kind of grunt work while you work as a professor at Harvard. I might even go back to engineering."

"I couldn't deal with it."

Karel wanted to complain that things apparently hadn't really changed that much, but he let it go.

"Let's look at the fieldwork."

They dug around in their backpacks and spread out some letters that they had received from various sources.

"Our travel agents say that the best charter service in the Islands is a couple of guys named Wycliffe and Zedidiah."

"Yeah." 

"They say they're a little crazy at times, too."

"They still recommend them. We can meet them at the main island and make our minds up there?"

"Sure."

"How much time do we spend on the main island?"

"I need about two weeks. How about you?"

"I think I can do my stuff in one, but two would be a bit easier."

"We don't want to push our schedules on the people we're going to study, I think."

"Good point."

And they worked through an initial schedule to discuss with Professor MacVittie.

"Get a letter from Kristie?"

"Yeah. How about Dan?"

"Here it is."

And they read the letters together. Summer classes were going well, and they were having fun with the students. And they planned to get together at the end of summer, just the two of them, to hike in the canyons behind Dan's house.

And they wrote back, together, that they were getting ready for the new semester, and were looking at a lot of time together every day. Maybe too much.

("Should we go hiking up in the canyons here? Maybe up to the waterfalls?"

"Maybe.")

But maybe they'd have some time for a hike together here before school started.



Joel asked if he could consult with the two of them, together.

"You guys seem to know how to deal with being just friends."

Bobbie laughed and Karel looked up at the clouds over their heads. It was threatening rain and none of them had an umbrella with them.

"That sounds so upside down. Being friends is just what you do."

Bobbie tilted her head to the right. "We sure didn't know that three years ago."

"Maybe not as well as we know now. So, what is this big question?"

"Kelly says I shouldn't be waiting for her."

"Are you?"

"I don't know."

"Are you dating others?"

"Sure. We both agreed when she left that I should."

"She knows?"

"Sometimes I mention it if there was something especially interesting about a date."

"Do you know how she takes it when you do?"

"No. I gave up trying to read her reactions."

"That's good."

"Are you giving the others an honest chance?"

"That's what I don't know. Do you think there is something wrong with waiting?"

Bobbie and Karel looked at each other and asked the same question with their eyes.

"No."

"What do you think you should tell her?"

"I think I should tell her to just trust God. If I'm still single when she gets back, we can figure out what that might mean then."

"Sounds good to me."

"Me too."

And Joel felt a little better about it and said thanks, and left.



Melissa was quite visibly pregnant.

"I'm afraid they're going to have to hire a replacement for me before you guys leave."

"Substitute." Professor MacVittie said as came in the door. Your job will be waiting for you if you want it."

"It's nice the school has a nursery staffed by early childhood development students and their teachers."

"You wouldn't worry about leaving you child with students?" Karel asked.

"Not so much here. There are a lot of reliable students here."

"Any idea which it is?" Bobbie asked. My mother says if the baby stands, it's a boy, but if it lies sideways, it's a girl."

"Near as I can tell, this baby does a little of both. It'll be fun to find out."

And Karel asked, "Is Winn going to be there? Will the hospital allow it?"

"They said, if there aren't any complications, they're okay with it. Bobbie, do you think you could be there, too?"

"I am still on call, anyway. I'll talk to my boss there."

"Ahem. I think you two wanted to talk about schedules?"

Bobbie pulled her copy out, because it was cleaner and easier to read.

"Here's what we came up with the other day."

"Two weeks on each island," the professor said to himself.

"For a total of two months. Do you think it's too long?"

"Noooo, not too long at all."

"Two months seems like such a long time."

Melissa said, "It would make a nice honeymoon."

Suddenly, Bobbie and Karel were looking anywhere but at the schedule or each other.

"Theoretical honeymoon. Someone else's. I mean, I think I would enjoy two months on those islands as a second honeymoon."

Professor MacVittie was just grinning.

"Sorry, I shouldn't have said that."

Bobbie laughed. "No problem."

Karel nodded and said, half to himself, "I would never have thought of that."

And Bobbie giggled.

Professor MacVittie cleared his throat again. "Have you discussed this with the travel agent?"

"We were going to write them today or tomorrow."

"Good. Where are your tentative research plans?"

"Here."

"Mine, too."

"I'll look these over and we'll talk next week. I'm glad you are talking more often than once a week now."

"Well, you know, ..."

Bobbie just laughed. Then she said, "I've got to go study."

"Me, too."

And they left.

Professor MacVittie said, "I couldn't have timed that better myself, Sister Burns."

"It was okay?"

"It was perfect. I don't know if it will be enough, but I think you are helping them overcome whatever it is that's in the way.

"Are they going to be okay if they aren't married before they go?"

"They are about as dependable as you get, but, yeah, that's an important question. I've been talking about it with Dean Hayworth, and I may have to go with them. Not that my wife would mind."

"I'm jealous. Just a little."



As they walked to the library, Karel said, "Could we try kissing again?"

"I need to keep my mind clear."

"Funny, I'm not sure I want to keep my mind clear."

Bobbie gave him a shove. A gentle shove, but he overreacted and tumbled into the grass.

Bobbie sat down beside him and tickled him. And then they just sat for a few minutes, until Bobbie said,

"You know what the real reason I'm holding back is?"

"Give me a clue."

Bobbie took Karel's hand.

"I still emotionally shy away from it."

"What."

"What married couples are supposed to do on their wedding night."

"Making babies."

"Yeah, that."

"And I'm scared of losing this image I have of you as the perfect man."

"Platonic or Plutonic?"

Bobbie slapped his stomach. Somewhat gently.

"Abuse."

"You wish."

"Do I?" He grinned. "Never mind. You do know that the medieval concept of a Platonic relationship isn't exactly what Plato taught?"

"Yes. It doesn't matter. I can't ..."

Karel waited, but she couldn't continue.

And Bobbie remained sitting there, with her hand on his hand on his stomach.


After some thought and a silent prayer, Karel said, "Have you thought about the society in which Plato taught?"

"Am I asking for too much, for a society in which people respect each other?"

"Strangers in a strange land, wanderers in the wilderness, seekers of a better world. We seek for it, but I don't know if we can have it. Sometimes I worry about raising my kids in this less-than-perfect world, but God said we needed a place to grow."

"Sometimes I don't like God."

"I wanted to say, 'our kids'."

"I wanted you to. Sort of. I can't. Karel, why do I keep hurting you?"

Bobbie covered her face with her hands, and Karel swung himself up to sit beside her and just hold her while she sobbed.

"I'm sorry, too. But that image of me as some sort of pseudo-Platonic saint sure isn't necessary."

"What?" Bobbie asked between sobs.

"Never mind. Bishop South asked me once whether I love you. I told him I want you to be happy, and I want to be part of your happiness. I think he understood."

"I love you, too, Karel."

After a little while, they stood up. Karel offered Bobbie his handkerchief, and they went to the library together.

"You know, Kristie's experiment didn't really fail."

"Huh?"

"I'd never been able to kiss you before that at all. I don't know why I could kiss Dan or other guys."

And Karel just squeezed Bobbie's hand. And mumbled something like, "Thank you, Dan."

"And Kristie." Bobbie had heard his mumbling.



Some time later, they were reading a letter from Trisha and Charles sitting on the grass on the quad, when Joel caught up with them.

"Look at this letter from Kelly!"

And he really meant he wanted them to read it. Bobbie took it, and Karel read over her shoulder while Joel sat beside them looking really worried.

Karel said, "Core dump of the heart."

Bobbie and Joel both turned puzzled faces toward him.

"When a computer gets in certain error states that it can't recover from, an engineer dumps the core. Prints it out without decoding it. Only an engineer trained to program that particular computer can make sense of it."

"Huh?"

Bobbie interpreted. "I think what our genius just said is that God is the engineer who told Kelly to pour her heart out to you. And God is the one you're going to have to ask what it means."

[JMR201608132047: Karel said, ] "Thanks for interpreting that for me."

"I'm a little scared."

"Read it, pray about it, talk with your bishop, and write to her mission president what God tells you to write, ..." Karel started.

Bobbie finished, "... and then write her a long letter and don't hold anything back. She needs you."

"I'd say take it easy on the mushy stuff, but, no, like Bobbie says, don't hold back. Let God speak through you, even if it's mushy."

"That's kind of what I was thinking. But I wasn't sure whether I should tell her, well, everything I feel. Thanks." And he left.

Bobbie said, as they watched him leave, "That was profound."

And they shared a hug.




"Professor MacVittie, Bobbie and I are both feeling like two weeks is not enough."

"Oh?"

"We think we need time to do volunteer kinds of things. Service projects, I guess."

"What a wonderful idea!"

[JMR201608132049:

"Is a full month at each island going to be too much time?"

"Maybe not."


]



Bobbie helped deliver Melissa's baby. She was called to the hospital before classes, and Karel's car was the closest to campus, so he drove her to the hospital and went back to take notes. Then he drove back to pick her up and see the baby and the proud parents. It was a girl, since some people will wonder.

[JMR201608132053 I'm sure I'm forgetting lots of little stuff like this:





"What are we going to do on Sundays?" Bobbie asked.

"Uhm. Oh, wow. The Church has no branches or wards on those islands. We need to ask our bishops."

"You need to ask your bishop."

"We."

"You."

"Ask anyway. And I'll ask, too."



Bishop Graystoke explained to Bobbie that, yes, Karel would be the one ultimately responsible for their church services on the islands, but she would need to help him.

And he made arrangements for her to get manuals on Church organization, policy, and operation for her to study.

Of course she knew she would need to help Karel, but she hadn't realized she would need to learn so much.

Bishop South talked to the stake president, and they got the manuals he'd need.

They also made arrangements for authorization for him to hold meetings with Bobbie and any other interested people.

Professor MacVittie helped Karel and Bobbie look up the laws about religion on the Islands, so they could work out how to legally hold their meetings.

There would be no direct proselyting, no advertising, no invitations. But they wouldn't need to turn away people who asked out of their own interest.

They also gave Karel and Bobbie contact information for the nearest units of the Church and the nearest church leaders for the islands.





Somehow, even with all of this, and all the classwork and study groups and teaching and service in the temple and hikes in the canyon or up the mountain near campus, they couldn't get the walls down before winter break.

But they did complete their studies and the arrangements for the fieldwork.

And Professor MacVittie and his wife and son made their preparations.



[JMR201608161129:

During December, they were both (individually) called in for temple recommend interviews. The recommends they were given were marked valid for all live ordinances not yet received.

Just in case they traveled close to a temple and decided to receive a certain live ordinance.

Or they could even receive that ordinance before they left, if they were so minded, but of course they weren't instructing them to do so and shouldn't feel any pressure about it.

Bobbie and Karel both thanked their bishops.

When they met later in the ground floor lounge of Bobbie's dorm, they laughed about it.

But Karel did ask Bobbie if she thought she could. She said she still just wasn't quite ready for it, and apologized, and Karel just hugged her and said it was okay.




]
Karel and his parents drove up to the Whitmers to pick Bobbie up after Christmas.

"Strange thing happened to me over the holidays."

"Tell me about it."

"I passed a kind of run-down looking place that had a sign that said, 'Church of the Morning of Jesus'."

"That's a strange name."

"I needed gas, and there was a gas station next door, so I stopped."

"Uh, huh."

"I recognized the guy at the counter. It was the bishop's son who couldn't keep his hands off me."

"I guess that was a shock?"

"He recognized me. He apologized, and he called his Dad over from the church."

"Was that a little scary?"

"A little, but God told me to wait. They both apologized. So I forgave them."

"That's cool."

"I asked them about their church. They explained the 'morning' thing. It's code for A. M."

"Huh?"

"Anti-Mormon."

"You're kidding. Or they're kidding."

"They said, any publicity is good publicity."

"Double-huh?"

"They didn't feel like they could come back to church, so they've basically set up an outreach for the real outcasts, the men and women who can't get help anywhere else."

Bobbie's dad came in about then. "Telling them about our old friends, I hear. I've known about it for some time. Stop by there to get gas regularly. They've been one of the reasons I started coming back to Church. Wasn't sure how Bobbie would feel about it, so I never mentioned it. And the Anti-Mormon stuff is basically a ruse. It seems to help a lot of people who don't trust anyone any more to relax a little and get their feet on the ground."

"God moves in a mysterious way." Karel chuckled, then turned serious. "But are they going to be okay?"

"They say they figure as long as they keep helping people get back on their feet, they're where God wants them to be."

"There is some point to that."



Instead of going straight back to school, they drove down to the Claymounts' to spend time with Dan and Kristie and the Persons, who were visiting. The Whitmers came with, and the four families spent some good time together.

Sheliah kept saying, "Go Dan!" and "Go Karel." Our four friends appreciated it.

And then the Pratts and Whitmers took Bobbie and Karel to the university.



The link to the last of the characterization chapters will be here when it's ready is here: http://free-is-not-free.blogspot.com/2016/08/economics-101-novel-ch09-in-islands.html.

(The chapter index is here: http://joel-rees-economics.blogspot.jp/2016/04/economics-101-novel-index.html)

Thursday, August 11, 2016

[Backup] Economics 101 pasteboard flight

[This is material that didn't make it into Getting through Winter in the Second Year: http://free-is-not-free.blogspot.com/2016/08/economics-101-novel-ch07-pt2-getting.html, (produced during the work backed up here: http://joel-rees-economics.blogspot.jp/2016/08/bk-economics-101-novel-ch07-pt2-getting.html. Originally at http://free-is-not-free.blogspot.com/2016/08/pasteboard-flight.html, which was never published.)]

Then Bobbie said, "Say guys, I have something I need a little help with."

Karel said, "We're all ears."

"I told you guys I have a pilot's certificate, didn't I?"

"Huh?"

"Oh, yeah."

"So what's up?"

"It's been a while since I've flown, and I need a little time in the air."

Dan suggested, "How about flying us all down to St. George and taking a hike in Zion's Canyon?"

"That's kind of what I was thinking."

"I'm in."

"Count me in, too."

"How do we get from the park to the Canyon?"

"Karel, you are such a wet blanket."

"If you have friends with big farms, you don't have to put down in the public airport."

"Cool!"

"Now how am I supposed to do the wet blanket thing about that?"

And they all laughed, quietly, so as not to disturb other students.

"When ya got in mind?"

"This weekend?"

"What about studying for the tests?"

"We can study in the air."

"If you guys spell my at the controls, I can do some studying, too."

"How does that work out as practice?"

"What I need most is getting in the air and getting back down. The rest is mostly practice staying awake, and keeping an eye on the weather and the instruments, which I can do while I study."

"Well let's get as much study as we can out of the way. "


Early Saturday morning at the airport, Bobbie's little brother Rick flew in with his wife, Lupe. Bobbie and Rick checked the plane out while the others watched, and Rick got started fueling it.

Bobbie showed the other three how to read the weather forecast for the prevailing winds and set up the flight plan. Just for fun, Karel showed them how to use calculus instead of the flight computer. But they all agreed that took too long.



You are thinking that a flight computer is an anachronism. I know you are. So look up "E-6B flight computer" on your favorite search engine.

Oh, you knew about that already. Maybe I shouldn't pretend to know so much about airplanes, after all.




When they were finished with the flight plan, Bobbie and Rick took it to the airport office to file it.

Then she had her friends walk through the pre-flight checklist with her and explained the various procedures to them, to refresh her own memory.

And then they made a phone call to the friends who owned the land where they would be setting down, so they could have an idea when to expect them. And they boarded the plane with Bobbie at the controls and Rick in the co-pilot's seat, taxied out, got final clearance, and took off.

Karel, Dan, and Kristie each took a turn at the controls, with Rick coaching them, while the rest studied and watched the scenery below. They didn't get as much studying done as they might have, but they had fun with it.

Rick and Lupe got involved with their discussions of Lectures on Faith.

Lupe said, "Rick and I have been reading it, and I'm not sure it is very important any more."

Rick agreed. "It seems to me that the primary ideas in it that don't seem to be as clearly made somewhere else are faith as the power of God and the generality of the Abrahamic sacrifice."


Tuesday, August 9, 2016

[Backup] Economics 101, a Novel, ch_06 pt_5 -- Heading into Summer

[JMR20180106: backup of http://free-is-not-free.blogspot.com/2016/08/economics-101-novel-ch06-pt5-heading.html.] 

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He didn't get certified, but he praticed taking off and landing and other things essential for a co-pilot.
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He didn't get certified, but he practiced taking off and landing and other things essential for a co-pilot.

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"Wait a minute."
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"Wait a saichi."

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The other four? George, Harry, Rocky, and Roxanne, whom I haven't introduced.
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The other four? George, Harry, Rocky, and Roxanne, none of whom have I introduced.

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They dodged under some limbs and scramble across a tight path on a slope.
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They dodged under some limbs and scrambled across a tight path on a slope covered in spots in packed left-over snow.

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"You and Ruth."He looked around.
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"You and Ruth." He looked around.

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Mike and Ruth's parents and other family members joined them, of course. Our four friends were there, and, while Kelly ready yet to attend their sealing, Joel was there.

A temple marriage is pretty simple. Some Ehyephoots who want fancy weddings think they are too simple, but that is at best a matter of taste.
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Mike and Ruth's parents and other family members joined them, of course. Our four friends were there, and, while Kelly wasn't ready yet to attend their sealing, Joel was there.

A temple marriage is pretty simple. Some Ehyephoots who want fancy weddings think they are too simple, but that is at most a matter of taste.

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At the last folk dance team practice before summer, Kelly had an announcement.

"I've got my mission call! It's to South Joneh. I'll be leaving towards the end of summer, so I can stay with the team until we're done for summer."
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At the last folk dance team practice before summer vacation, Kelly had an announcement.

"I've got my mission call! It's to South Joneh! I'll be leaving towards the end of summer, so I can stay with the team until the middle of summer vacation."

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Bobbie promised to be there to help when she went to the temple for the first time sometime during late July or August.
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Bobbie promised to be there to help when she went to the temple for the first time sometime during late June or early July. (Well, let me call them June and July -- sixth and seventh months.)
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Bobbie promised to be there to help when she went to the temple for her own endowments sometime during late June or early July. (Well, let me call them June and July -- sixth and seventh months.)

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Bobbie took some time off and borrowed her dad's company plane during late May for practice. Karel took some time off, as well, and Bobbie taught him how to fly the plane. He didn't get certified, but he learned enough to be useful as an emergency co-pilot, practicing taking of and landing several times.
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Bobbie took some time between winter semester and first summer term, and borrowed her dad's plane to practice. Karel stayed long enough for Bobbie to teach him the basics of flying. He didn't get certified, but he praticed taking off and landing and other things essential for a co-pilot.

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Kelly waited until almost the last moment, in mid-August. She wanted her mother to be there, but her mother wouldn't get herself ready. So Bobbie and some of the sisters in Kelly's congregation who had been helping her prepare went with her to help her on her first time through the temple ordinances.
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Kelly waited until almost the last moment, in mid-June. She wanted her mother to be there, but her mother wouldn't get herself ready. So Bobbie and some of the sisters in Kelly's congregation who had been helping her prepare went with her to help her on her first time through the temple ordinances.
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Kelly waited until almost the last moment, in mid-June, for her temple ordinances in preparation to serve her mission. She wanted her mother to be there, but her mother wouldn't get herself ready. So Bobbie and some of the sisters in Kelly's congregation who had been helping her prepare went with her to help her on her first time through the endowment ordinances.

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In the previous chapters, we have watched them discussing faith as they explored their relationships with the people around them. All these things going on during the second semester, and we've just barely gotten beyond the halfway point. Were they really so busy?

Now they've known each other for a few months.

Sure, they had some really special experiences early on, but the special experiences don't really determine anything. It's what they do next that starts defining the paths they take.

So it's kind of natural that this semester has a lot to talk about -- I guess.
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So, they have known each other for almost half a year, now. We have watched them study and discuss faith. They had some special moments early on, but special moments don't define us, or our relationships. It's what we do next that sends us one way or another.

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"What, uh, ..." But he decided to think his question through first. "So you thought you'd join their study group, too?"
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"What are, uh, ..." But he decided to think his question through first. "So you thought you'd join their study group, too?"

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Kristie said, "You and Karel can be roommates?"
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Kristie said, "So you and Karel can be roommates?"

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Bobbi and Kristie looked at each other. "We'd miss our roommates, but some of them are moving out anyway," Kristie said.
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Bobbie and Kristie looked at each other. "We'd miss our roommates, but some of them are graduating and moving out anyway," Kristie said.

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If it moves with a sense of self -- confidence, it's sharp, smart, cool, or whatever.
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If it moves with a sense of self -- of confidence -- it's sharp, smart, cool, or whatever.

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"Chemistry is about how that stuff mixes. How we react to each other in non-verbal ways."

"Okay, I can see that."
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"Chemistry is about how that stuff mixes. How we react to each other in non-verbal ways."

"I can see that."

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So it's safe, because it makes you change.
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So it feels safe, because it doesn't seem to make you change.

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"No you're not. It only seems safe. It actually isn't."
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"No you're not. The distant beauty only seems safe. It actually isn't."

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Joel nodded confusedly. "What's the other kind?"
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"All right," Joel nodded confusedly. "What's the other kind?"

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Comfortable, 'cause it has good chemistry. But it doesn't make you complacent. But it also has the down side of sometimes having bad chemistry. Supposed down side. Bad chemistry makes you stretch and grow,makes you happier tomorrow.
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Comfortable, 'cause it's familiar. And it has good chemistry. But it doesn't make you complacent. And it also has the down side of sometimes having bad chemistry. Supposed down side. Bad chemistry makes you stretch and grow, makes you happier tomorrow.

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"Hormonal wires. If you can tell one you're excited, what's exciting you and why. And how. Not all excitement is the same."
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"Hormonal wires. If you can tell when you're excited, what's exciting you and why. And how. Not all excitement is the same."

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Joel came in. His eyes were a little blood-shot. "I did not sleep well last night."
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Joel came in. His eyes were only a little blood-shot. "I did not sleep well last night."

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"South America. I loved my mission. If the Church would let me, I'd like to stay a missionary forever."

Dan nodded and said, "Haven't some of the general authorities been saying something in the stake conferences about every member becoming a missionary?"

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I think I've mentioned that a stake is roughly a diocese-sized unit of the Church. Two times a year (four in the time and place of this story), leaders come to conferences to talk about faith and religion, and how our faith and religion should help us be better people, and to take care of various matters of Church business.

Did I mention that stakes are so named because of the passage in Isaiah about enlarging the place of the tent and strengthening the stakes? Where is that? Ah. Isaiah 54: 2.

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"South Joneh. I loved my mission. If the Church would let me, I'd like to stay a missionary forever."

Dan nodded and said, "Haven't some of the general authorities been saying something in the conferences about every member becoming a missionary?"

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Kelly showed up about this point, but didn't say anything. She just sat down, away from where Joel was. And although Joel noticed she came in, he didn't notice that she had come in, not from the stairs, but from the stacks, where she had been listening all along.
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Kelly showed up about this point, but didn't say anything. She just sat down, away from where Joel was. And although Joel noticed she came in, he didn't notice that she had come in, not from the stairs, but from the stacks, where she had been listening.

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"Yeah. So, service projects are good."
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"Yeah."

"Volunteer kinds of stuff."

"So, service projects are good."

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He turned and looked back at them. "Uhm, wait, are you asking for witnesses? I mean, for real?"
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He turned and looked back at them. "Uhm, wait, are you two maybe asking for witnesses? I mean, for real?"

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Some time later, our four protagonists were waiting in an office in the school offices basement for someone from the school standards office to interview them.
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Some time later, our four protagonists were waiting in a basement office for someone from school standards to interview them.

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Our four friends were there, and, while Kelly couldn't yet enter the temple, Joel was there.
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Our four friends were there, and, while Kelly wasn't ready yet to attend their sealing, Joel was there.

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A temple marriage is pretty simple. Some Mormons who want fancy weddings think they are too simple, but that is at best a matter of taste.

The nature of the ceremony is not such that you would necessarily notice anything different from many Christian ceremonies if you weren't looking. You might notice that the person performing the marriage says something about time and eternity instead of "until death separates you."
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A temple marriage is pretty simple. Some Ehyephoots who want fancy weddings think they are too simple, but that is at best a matter of taste.

The nature of the ceremony is not such that you would necessarily notice anything different from many Christian ceremonies in our world if you weren't looking. You might notice that the person performing the marriage says something about time and eternity instead of "until death separates you."

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"I've got my mission call! It's to South America. I'll be leaving towards the end of summer, so I can stay with the team until we're done for summer."
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"I've got my mission call! It's to South Joneh. I'll be leaving towards the end of summer, so I can stay with the team until we're done for summer."

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Kelly waited until almost the last moment, in mid-August, to go to the temple for the first time. She wanted her mother to be there, but her mother wouldn't get herself ready. So Bobbie and some of the Relief Society sisters in Kelly's ward who had been helping her prepare went with her to help her on her first time through.
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Kelly waited until almost the last moment, in mid-August. She wanted her mother to be there, but her mother wouldn't get herself ready. So Bobbie and some of the sisters in Kelly's congregation who had been helping her prepare went with her to help her on her first time through the temple ordinances.

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(The framing story starts is here: http://free-is-not-free.blogspot.jp/2016/03/economics-101-novel-ch00.html. If you haven't read that, you might want to. Otherwise, the rest of this may not make much sense.

Introductions and characterizations begin here: http://free-is-not-free.blogspot.com/2016/05/economics-101-novel-ch01-introducing.html.

In the previous chapter, we got to see more of the group date activities that Bobbie and Karel and Dan and Kristie participated in together: http://free-is-not-free.blogspot.com/2016/05/economics-101-novel-ch05-first-semester.html.

And the trip back to school for the second semester was important, too. Don't skip that: http://free-is-not-free.blogspot.com/2016/06/economics-101-novel-ch05-9-heading-back.html.

In part one of this chapter, we get to watch them get serious about life as their second semester as graduate students begins: http://free-is-not-free.blogspot.com/2016/07/economics-101-novel-ch06-pt1-second.html.

In parts two through four, we get to watch them make some adjustments as they date others.
If you don't care about characterization, you might want to jump ahead: http://free-is-not-free.blogspot.jp/2016/03/economics-101-novel-ch10-bobbie-and.html.)

All these things going on during the second semester. And we've just barely gotten beyond the halfway point. Were they really so busy?

They've known each other for a few months.

Sure, they had some really special experiences before this semester began, but the special experiences don't really determine anything. It's what they do next that starts defining the paths they take.

So it's kind of natural that this semester has a lot to talk about.

Isn't it?



"Keh-lee-ee!" There was an accusatory tone in Joel's voice.

"What?"

"What, uh, ..." But he decided to think his question through first. "So you thought you'd join their study group, too?"

"You're not studying what they're studying, either."

"Hi, guys." Bobbie put her books on one of the tables. "You decided to visit?"

"Is it okay?" Kelly asked.

"I don't think of a reason you couldn't," Bobbie replied.

"Just don't expect to be able to follow everything." Kristie added. She had already come in and had her books out.

"I guess I should sit over there," Joel said, yielding the field, so to speak.

Dan and Karel came in together.

"Hi, guys." Both put their books down, but not together and not particularly close to Bobbie or Kristie. They had gotten into the habit of not sitting too close together in the study groups, so they could help other members of the group join in.

Dan said, "I'm thinking of living on campus next year. Thinking I need time for studies."

Kristie said, "You and Karel can be roommates?"

Karel replied, "Actually, I've been invited to be a resident assistant next year. RAs don't have roommates."

"Well, that's a posh job," Bobbie joked. "Are you taking it?"

"Thinking about it. There's an RA on each floor. They say they want stable older students who can help the younger students. And they hinted that my 'friends' would be welcome, too, by the way."

Dan looked up. "Meaning us?"

"Meaning you guys. We seem to stand out."

Bobbi and Kristi looked at each other. "We'd miss our roommates, but some of them are moving out anyway," Kristie said.

"One more thing, however," Karel added. "They seem to be planning on spreading us out in separate buildings, so we can each help more younger and less experienced RAs."

"Without even asking us first." Bobbie sounded a little put out. "I suppose the four of us should go talk with whoever's in charge."

"It might not be a bad idea."

And more of the group came in. Mike and came in after Ruth, but sat down beside her. And Trisha came in with Charles, as usual.

And everyone got started studying.



Joel was walking to class the next afternoon, lost in his own thoughts.

"Hello, Joel!"

He turned around. "Oh, Bobbie! I didn't see you. Thanks for letting me and Kelly study with you guys."

"It's not like we're going to throw you out of the library," she joked. "Were you able to get any studying done with all the noise and chatter? Sometimes I wonder, that the staff doesn't come by and tell us to be quiet."

"I didn't actually end up studying. Watching you guys is a different kind of education."

"That sounds scary."

"Lots of things surprise me."

"Oh?"

"Trisha and Charles, for instance. Clearly, they are together, but they don't even hold hands, at least, not very much."

"Hard to hold hands when you're studying."

"And Mike and Ruth are, like, staying under the radar."

"They would be disappointed if we noticed, so we don't."

"I've been thinking about my relationship with Kelly. I don't really know why I date her."

"She's cute?"

"But every girl in your group is beautiful."

"They would like to hear that more often, I'll bet. But what does that have to do with Kelly?"

"She's not the only cute girl on campus."

"True." Bobbie paused. "I'll tell you a great secret, if you promise to use the knowledge wisely."

"You sound mysterious."

"Actually, it's no big deal. Just want you to think about it carefully."

"I'm listening."

"Beauty, cute, attraction. There are many things that go into the mix. Conventional good looks like what Kristie and I have are completely arbitrary inventions of society. And they can be a curse, more than a blessing."

"Wow." Joel had to stop walking. "That's, ..."

"Mind bending?"

"I can see why you warned me."

"Oh, I'm not done yet."

"No?"

"Anything that moves by itself is attractive."

"Now I'm lost."

"Hang in there. If it moves with confidence, it is considered sharp, smart, cool, or whatever."

"Now I'm maybe not so lost."

"Someone who non-verbally asks for attention is cute."

"Kelly demands my attention. Or, until I told her we needed to try to be apart for a while, she did."

"Have you ever heard of the word 'chemistry' to describe how people relate to each other -- bad chemistry, good chemistry, no chemistry, that kind of thing?"

"As in, how well they relate?"

"Uh, huh."

"Yeah. Okay."

"Family traditions. Personal habits. Things we pick up from the crowd we run in. We each have such things."

"Uhmm, yeah?"

"Chemistry is about how that stuff mixes. How we react to each other on the non-verbal levels."

"Yeah, I can see that."

"There are two kinds of beauty."

"Wait a minute."

"Hang in there. One kind is a distant kind, often a cold kind. It's full of promises that you know can never be fulfilled. It's safe because it will never make you change. And it's attractive because you can addict yourself to it safely."

"Uh, help. I'm getting lost."

"No you're not. It seems safe, but actually it isn't."

"Why not?"

"Because you get addicted to it and it fools you into thinking it satisfies some longing when it doesn't. And it changes you, after all. Makes you complacent. Teaches you to not bother seeking the better beauty. No chemistry to mess with. That's why it's cool, or even cold."

"What's the other kind of beauty?"

"It's a warm beauty. Comfortable, because it's good chemistry. But it doesn't make you complacent. And it has the supposed down side of sometimes having bad chemistry."

"Okay, I'm having a mental melt-down. I need to get to class."

"One more thing."

"Huh?"

"Beauty doesn't have to be sexy, if your hormonal wires aren't crossed."

"How am I going to pay attention in my next class? You are evil."

"You'll survive."

"Can you be early to the next study group?"

"Sure."



True to her word, Bobbie was early. Dan was, too.

Joel came in. His eyes looked a little blood-shot. "I did not sleep well last night."

"My fault? Sorry." Bobbie did not seem too sorry.

"Thinking about the chemistry thing. I got back from my mission recently."

"Where did you go?" asked Dan.

"South America. I loved my mission. If the Church would let me, I'd like to stay a missionary forever."

Dan said, "Haven't some of the general authorities been saying something in the stake conferences about every member becoming a missionary?"



I think I've mentioned that a stake is roughly a diocese-sized unit of the Church. At the time this is set in, there were four stake conferences a year. (Now we have two stake conferences each year.)

At a stake conference leaders come and talk about faith and religion and how our faith and religion should help us be better people. And they also take care of various matters of Church business.

Did I mention that stakes are so named because of the passage in Isaiah about enlarging the place of the tent and strengthening the stakes? Where is that? Ah. Isaiah 54: 2.



"Kelly says she couldn't even imagine being a missionary."

"There are many different kinds of missions," Bobbie pointed out. "Being a mother is one mission for most women."

Karel came in about then.

"Oh." Joel paused and thought. "But when I was a missionary, I was so focused. Now I'm losing my focus."

Dan said, "Now, Karel, here, would tell you that it's probably time to focus on a new mission."

Trisha and Charles came in and sat down. Ruth followed them.

Karel raised his hands in resignation. "Sorry, I'm not quite clear on what we're talking about."

Kristie came in, followed by Mike and Piers and some of the others.

Bobbie turned to Karel and asked, "Have you ever thought that becoming too focused on one thing might make it harder to see?"

"Sure," he replied. "You generally need context to understand what you are looking at, and if you're too focused, it can be hard to get yourself to look at the context."

Kelly showed up about this point, but didn't say anything. She just sat down, away from where Joel was. And although Joel noticed she came in, he didn't notice that she had come in, not from the stairs, but from the stacks, where she had been listening all along.

"So, maybe I need to focus less on, ... . I guess I need to focus on school and work, now."

"Sure. So let's focus on our studies."

But Dan announced, "Before we start, I'm in the mood for hiking this Saturday. Who's coming with me?"



In addition to our four friends, Charles and Trisha and twelve others came along to hike. (Ruth and Mike, and Joel and Kelly were among them. Chad was also there with a guy named Bruce from his ward, and Wendy and Jennifer. The other four? George, Harry, Rocky, and Roxanne, whom I haven't introduced.) Dan, Trisha, and Charles each drove a car, and they packed themselves in, six to a car.

At the trail head, they all got out and checked their preparations. Karel, Bobbie, and Kristie lead out, but Dan, Trisha, and Charles got back in their cars and drove to the end of the trail so the others wouldn't have to hike both ways to get to a car. The three of them hiked in from the end of the trail,to meet the others about halfway.

While they hiked in, Trisha and Charles decided they wanted to consult with Dan.

"You're an expert on love, aren't you Dan?" Charles asked.

"You gotta be kidding."

But Trisha insisted. "The four of you guys know everything."

"If we knew everything, why aren't we paired off and married?"

"But there is a good reason, right?" she pressed.

"Okay, I'll give you that one."

"Trisha and I are, well, we like each other."

"You make it no secret."

"But we aren't sure we really love each other."

"Uh, huh. My parents tell me, every time I call home, that you have to just close your eyes and jump at some point. Very helpful, that. At least my little sister understands."

The three of them laughed.

The trail led down a gravel slope at that point, and they focused on avoiding slipping until they got out of the gravel.

"The thing is, when Charles and I met each other, we were both, uhm, how do I describe this?"

"You had terrible crushes on Karel and Bobbie."

"Yeah. You know." Charles nodded. "Starstruck."

"The four of us still have terrible crushes on each other."

"Oh." Trisha had a flash of inspiration. "Is that the reason you don't, uhm, pair off, yet?"

"Maybe. ... Uhm, no. Crushes are not good reasons to marry. Not really relevant to the question at all. There are other things we are waiting for."

"So, Trisha and I really shouldn't worry about it?

"Just keep getting to know each other. Like this hike is great, because you've got something to do besides focus on each other."

"Like what you guys told Joel the other day, needing to see each other in different contexts?"

"Yeah. Service projects, work, study, but you are already studying together. When you two went to look at Trisha's lab work, you didn't spend the night making out in the lab, did you?"

"Well, we did hold hands a little, and we kissed once or twice when there were no other students or teachers around."

"Once or twice is not going to make you go emotionally blind, I think. Oh, and Trisha runs the lights for the dance department, and you help her with that, don't you, Charles?"

"Yeah. So, service projects."

"Like the cannery and other things at welfare square. Or going to a cemetery, with permission, of course, and helping weed and clean. Or helping at a hospital."

Charles looked at Trisha. "Cemetery cleaning?"

"Sounds scary! Let's try it."

"Not at midnight." Dan cautioned. "I don't think the groundskeepers will give you permission for that."

"Darn!" Trisha grinned.

"Not that I know anything about cemeteries at midnight." Dan said, ironically.

And they laughed at that.

He continued. "I really don't think you two need to worry. You're already doing a lot of things right."

"Thanks for the vote of confidence."

"But do be a little patient. Time is also helpful, usually."

And the topic shifted to a discussion of good places to hike and ways to prepare for hikes. And then to rock climbing and running rapids and such, until they met the rest of the group hiking up.

Back at the end of the trail, Dan's car would not start.

Trisha had jumper cables and other tools in her car, and they tightened his alternator belt and gave him a jump start.

"Before we go home this summer, we'd better give all our cars a good checkup." Karel said. "I have a friend who will lend us a bay and tools for a reasonable fee."

So the next two Saturdays turned into pit stop days, and Karel, Bobbie, and
Trisha showed Kristie, Dan, Charles, and several other students some basics in maintaining car engines -- checking the battery fluid levels (No permanent seals back then.), oil and coolant levels, fan belt etc. Karel's friend was even patient enough with them to allow them to practice checking and adjusting the spark timing.
 


Some time later, the four of them were waiting in an office in the school employment center basement for someone from the school standards office to interview them.

Dan asked, "So, Bobbie, you're going to work through the summer and then quit at the hospital."

"Yeah. Except they want me on call for emergencies in obstetrics. And you and Kristie have arranged some student teaching at summer schools in your home towns, right?"

Kristie said, "Yes, that's the plan for both of us. And Karel, you're going to go back home and do some contract engineering for the company your dad works for."

"That's right. We're going to suffer withdrawal pains, not seeing each other every day."

There were a few moments of uncomfortable silence. But it didn't stay uncomfortable for long.

"We're going to get together at the end of summer, just like we did for new years, right?" Dan suggested. "Oh, wait. Both Kristie and I are scheduled right up to the week before classes."

"It's okay," Karel said. "We trust God and we love each other. And we seem to need some time apart, maybe like Kelly and Joel. When we get back, we'll be working together again."

"Excuse me, are you four still here?"

"Uhm, I think we need to talk with a Brother Mackintosh. Karel answered as he stood up.

"That would be me. But what do you need to talk about?"

"We're here for interviews."

"Oh, no. Sorry. You already passed your interviews with the dorm moms, and you've finished your paperwork here. If there are no further questions, we look forward to seeing you next fall. Make sure you come a week before classes start, so you can get moved in and help the early students."

"Uhm, excuse me, Kristie and I have student teaching in summer schools right up until that week."

"Oh, well it's a good thing you stuck around. Didn't we give you your schedules? Let me get those for you. And, student teaching, yes that gets priority. Make sure you finish that properly. Will you be able to make it by the first day?" Brother Mackintosh turned and started digging through a desk.

"Oh, yes." Kristie said. "I think I can make it at least four days before classes, if I push."

"Me, too."

"Oh, here it is. I need another secretary. We're just too busy. Sorry. Here are your schedules, and here are the instruction booklets. Actually, we should have had you read that first, but I'm sure you four will have no problems. Here's the rest of your information. Why don't you read that now, and if you have questions, you can ask before you leave. And let us know when you will be coming in, okay?"

"Uh, wow. Thanks." Bobbie was voice for them all. "Is my being on call for obstetrics going to be okay?"

"That will be just fine. In fact, you being an active nurse, we're likely to depend on you a lot. We assume you understand that we aren't well budgeted, and the guidance we operate under is rather flexible for a reason?"

"Inspiration?" Karel asked.

Dan rolled his eyes.

"Exactly. We do not want the dorms run like military barracks. As much as possible, we want the students to be on their honor. The dorm moms said you guys would understand that."

"No problem," said Dan. And they all nodded.

"One more thing. If you cease being single, give us a little advance warning, okay? Highly recommended, that ceasing being single thing." And he disappeared.

They looked at each other with surprised expressions. "We'd better read."

When they finished reading, they found a secretary and told her they thought they understood. She reminded them of the training sessions during the week before school. And then they left.

"So, this job is, like, we are supposed to be human stand-ins for guardian angels." Dan said, as they walked together to the library.

"Maintain ourselves able to receive inspiration at all times, and be guided to find the students that need help." Karel quoted from the mimeographed pages they had just read.

"Not to punish, but to rescue," Kristie said quietly.

Bobbie looked a little shell-shocked.

"Bobbie?" Karel asked.

"Are you okay?" Kristie asked.

"I'm going to be fine. God seems to be making sure I learn how to forgive. I am a little worried about Karel, though."

"I know how to leave things between students and their bishops."

"This is a really important job, and it's really important to do it right." Dan said.

And there was a chorus of amens.



"Is anyone besides me and Ruth going to the temple this week?" Mike asked.

It was the week before finals.

"Heh heh. You and Ruth. Should we tease them?"

Ruth grinned. "And just what would you tease us about?"

Piers turned and looked at them. "Uhm, are you asking for witnesses? I mean, for real?"

Mike said, "Yah."

And Ruth nodded. "You guys are among our good friends."

Trisha exclaimed, "The week before finals? Are you guys crazy? I mean, we kind of suspected something was going on, but, ..."

"We've known each other for years. We both live with our families, and I'm just going to stay with Mike's family for the first week or so. Mike's new job starts right after finals, so now seemed to be the best time."

There was a chorus of congratulations and volunteering to be witness for the wedding and complaints about no time for a wedding shower.

And Ruth explained that a wedding shower didn't seem to be necessary. They already had pretty much all the things they needed to get started, and it would just be more things to pack for the move.

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Less than half the group went to the temple that week. They were busy preparing for tests and the end of the school year.

Mike and Ruth's parents and other family members joined them, of course. Our four friends were there, and, while Kelly couldn't yet enter the temple, Joel was there.

A temple marriage is pretty simple. Some Mormons who want fancy weddings think they are too simple. The nature of the ceremony is not such that you would necessarily notice anything different from many Christian ceremonies if you weren't looking. You might notice that the person performing the marriage says something about time and eternity instead of "until death separates you."

After the ceremony, Joel was listening when Mike said something to Ruth about her being the most beautiful woman in the world. Trite words, maybe, but Joel had something more to think about.

I won't tell you whether Bobbie and Karel were listening, or what they thought about it. I mean, they did steal a glance at each other. Looked away, and then their eyes met again. And Karel blinked, and looked at the floor. But we won't talk about that.

And Kristie bit her lower lip and squeezed Dan's hand, and he squeezed hers back.





At the last folk dance team practice before summer, Kelly had an announcement.

"I've received my mission call to South America. I'll be leaving towards the end of summer, so I can stay with the team until we're done for summer."

Joel was floored. Everyone else was just surprised. And they all offered congratulations, and some promised to write.

Bobbie promised to be there to help when she went to the temple for the first time sometime during late July or August.

And Joel promised to be there, too, to show his support. [JMR201608101235: Like the rest of the team, except for the three of our four alternates, he was staying for summer classes.

Bobbie took some time off and borrowed her dad's company plane during late May for practice. Karel took some time off, as well, and Bobbie taught him how to fly the plane. He didn't get certified, but he learned enough to be useful as an emergency co-pilot, practicing taking of and landing several times.

Together, they took Joel and Kelly with them and to Kelly's home to visit her family. They tried to encourage them to support Kelly about going on her mission, telling them some of their good mission experiences and such, but both of Kelly's parents were against her going.

Kelly waited until almost the last moment, in mid-August, to go to the temple for the first time. She wanted her mother to be there, but her mother wouldn't get herself ready. So Bobbie and some of the Relief Society sisters in Kelly's ward who had been helping her prepare went with her to help her on her first time through.

And Joel and some other members of the team were also there to encourage her.

When it was time for Kelly to start her mission, Joel and Bobbie and a couple of other members of the team went with her to the Language Training Mission. (Or was it the Missionary Language Institute? I don't remember. This novel is fiction, right?)

Joel gave her a hug, but, by prior agreement, they did not share a goodbye kiss. And we won't try to get inside their minds or hearts. I just don't want to go there today.

Dan and Kristie had a fairly uneventful summer, so to speak. Well, they had lots of fun with their students.


All four had opportunities to date people I won't bother introducing. Interesting people, but not relevant to the plot of this story. All we need to know is that none of them were sitting still.


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The link to the second year of the characterizations will be here when it's ready is here: http://free-is-not-free.blogspot.com/2016/08/economics-101-novel-ch07-pt1-third.html.

(The chapter index is here: http://joel-rees-economics.blogspot.jp/2016/04/economics-101-novel-index.html)